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Adoptable Chibi dolls :OPEN: SALE!

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Only this weekend!! Black Friday and Cyber Monday SALE! 20% OFF on all sections! all info here: magexp.deviantart.com/journal/…

My new adoptable series! I didn't draw humanoid ones for a while...

I take payment in points an via paypal

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:pointr: Price: 10 $/ 1000 :points:  7 $/ 7000 :points:
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:pointr: Price:   15 $/ 1500 :points:  11$/ 1100 :points:
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:pointr: Price:   10 $/ 1000 :points:  7 $/ 7000 :points:

:bulletgreen: If Premium Content :bulletgreen:
This design is exclusively for sale on this terms:
If you want to buy it, leave comment in comments section of this deviation; when I accept transaction and you decide to pay using points, use this magexp.deviantart.com/art/700-… purchase button. When I receive your payment I will send you full sized file without my watermark. Design and original file will be exclusively yours.


:bulletgreen: If Paypal :bulletgreen:
If you want to buy it, leave comment in comments section of this deviation; when I accept transaction and you decide to pay via paypal, I will send you a note with my paypal adress. When I receive your payment I will send you full sized file without my watermark. Design and original file will be exclusively yours.

:bulletgreen: General rules :bulletgreen:
♥ You may change parts of the design/colours if you wish
♥ You may upload the image to your own account if you credit me for drawing it
♥ I will send the full sized version after the transaction
♥ Do not resell after purchase
♥ Please use this design only personal and credit me if you can;


Please look also at my other adoptables:
Vid Muerte adoptable auction :CLOSED: by MaGeXPThoothsomePonies sheet III :OPEN:1/3! by MaGeXPThoothsome Ponies sheet I :OPEN 1/3: by MaGeXPThoothsomePonies sheet II auction :OPEN 1/3: by MaGeXP

:bulletgreen: commision open!:bulletgreen: :pointr:magexp.deviantart.com/journal/…
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Firstly, these are cute and adorable. I love the use of colors and how well they work together within each girl's palette. The details that you've put into each of them shows a level of love and appreciation for them that many other adopt makers seem to forget. It's obvious that you put a ton of effort into this set and they're lovely!

That being said, there are a few areas that might be improved upon to make them even better.
There seems to be an inconsistent light source. For the third girl, the shading on the sleeves have a different light source then how you've shaded the legs and the rest of the dress. The middle girl's hat seems to have this problem with the rest of her design. The seafoam girl's dress is the same in this regard.

In the hair, I think they would benefit from more varied line weights. Tapering off the edges of the lines into thin little streaks would be a great addition to them. It would give the hair a more natural look and tie it into the soft shading of the rest of the piece.

The only other thing I might draw attention to would be the middle girl's eyes. They seem very stark and they stand out quite a lot. They're very dark and the over all appearance might benefit from a slightly lighter eye line. Maybe a dark navy blue like the shading in her dress instead of a stark black might be a good alternative.

That being said, I hope you have the best of luck with selling these cuties .w.